The Daily Haiku

A world of five - seven - five. At one time daily, now kind of sporadic.

April 28, 2009

Current theme: O is for Ophelia (from Hamlet)

For ABC Wednesday

The girl slowly slides
From the brink of sanity
At the loss of love

Foul manipulation
The choice to forever dance
In the dark water

Ophelia, the form
Of hopeless love and its loss
Despair's incarnation

13 Comments:

Blogger Rinkly Rimes said...

An unexpected pleasure!

3:59 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Hedwig said...

Your blog was an interesting acquaitance ! I'll be back later./kadermo.wordpress.com

4:01 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Sylvia K said...

Sad but lovely poem for O Day! Thanks for sharing!

5:39 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Jane Hards Photography said...

I echo Rinkly Rimes. We get so used to seeing images that words take us by surprise. Poor Ophelia, she was a haunted soul.

6:35 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Pat - Arkansas said...

Lovely haiku, and wonderful "O".

8:59 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Oh, Oh, indeed. Ophelia! Poor dear.. Good work!

10:18 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger J said...

Melancholic, a good capture of her character.

11:18 PM, April 28, 2009  
Blogger Los said...

I don't understand...
Othello gets a bad rap.
He was in love too.

6:45 AM, April 29, 2009  
Blogger Reader Wil said...

Ophelia speaks to my imagination too! Such a sad story! Very good post!

7:09 AM, April 29, 2009  
Blogger spacedlaw said...

Very sweet O

12:30 PM, April 29, 2009  
Blogger abb said...

Yours are always so much better than mine. (sigh)

2:45 PM, April 29, 2009  
Blogger Granny Smith said...

Lovely linked haikus to evoke Ophelia, a sad girl-child.

3:34 PM, April 29, 2009  
Blogger Ink and Stone said...

Thanks for the comments, everyone!
It made my day. :)

3:51 PM, April 29, 2009  

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